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Fate of the World still going. . . . . . . . . slowly. >_>

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Posted 27 February 2012 - 06:52 AM

Addicting read .50 it is simple enough that you can easily make story board out of it for a comic, but still detailed enough that your imagination can add it's own tastes.
The little dabs of humor are always appreciated, but I'm excited to see where it goes!

Hope you find someone to do the art, seems like a story with a lot of potential, even if it is slightly cliche. Personally I would go with a different font or maybe size,
but the color still works well to help distinguish between which personality is talking. Although Alex only having one color confused me from time to time.

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Posted 27 February 2012 - 05:20 PM

View PostEckhardt, on 27 February 2012 - 01:52 AM, said:

it is simple enough that you can easily make story board out of it for a comic,


It's fairly easy to come up with a style like that. When. Every. Single. Thought. You. Have. Is in. Anime. Styling. <_<

View PostEckhardt, on 27 February 2012 - 01:52 AM, said:

Personally I would go with a different font or maybe size,


You sir, are a genius.

And if things continue to go this smoothly, you can expect another chapter sometime around the weekend. :D


On another note, this is what happened when I saw this had two pages.
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Posted 28 February 2012 - 01:14 AM

View Post.50 Cal King, on 27 February 2012 - 05:20 PM, said:

It's fairly easy to come up with a style like that. When. Every. Single. Thought. You. Have. Is in. Anime. Styling. <_<



You sir, are a genius.

And if things continue to go this smoothly, you can expect another chapter sometime around the weekend. :D


On another note, this is what happened when I saw this had two pages.
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Damn anime and manga, how dare they force themselves into such a strong position in our lives ><

Reminds me how my prof. handed out a booklet that was designed like a comic and I started reading from the back and right to left....

Woot for next chapter :)
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Posted 02 March 2012 - 05:18 PM

So, time to change up the format, yet again. <_< (hopefully this will be the last)

Standard fonts for humans, Bold for demons. Also you'll see a different language, followed by (the translation) right afterwards.
Next time I do something like this, I'll just do the translation part.

And one more thing, I went back and changed the name of the language that the demons speak, plata lengua. Now it's cemjan duhkia, I'll explain this later. (maybe)
Chapter -12
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As a little bonus, here's a few fun facts. :P
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Posted 03 March 2012 - 07:33 AM

This chapter gave me some good laughs, I really enjoy the back and forth between Fen and Luci.

Keep up the good work!
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Posted 27 April 2012 - 12:13 PM

Now lets see if you can spot when I started to read Deadman Wonderland. :P


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I'll probably be taking a little break for now, I've got something else I want to try writing. :rolleyes:

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